I know I’ve said this 478412847 times. Idc I’ll say it again.
My frigging opening paragraph is supposed to go from vague ideas to specific, but my thesis at the end of my introduction is apparently too specific.
I’m not supposed to use contractions, but how the hell am I supposed to show a person’s possession without using ‘s?
I need transition sentences and whenever I have them she writes I need a concluding sentence. Whenever I have concluding sentences I need transition sentences.